Zoey Paletta Rhetoric Blog

The topic I have chosen to do is, how important is college education. I think adults that are 60 years of age or older don't think that a college education is as important because it wasn't something that was possible for them to do unless they were wealthy and could afford it. I think that people that are in there 40-50 they went to college if they could afford it and more people started to go but they could still get good paying jobs without a college degree. People that are at the age of 18 in high school that going to college is important because they were raised being told that they will go to college because parents can either afford it or financial aid is something that a lot of students are able to get. How important do you believe a college education is? How many of your family members earned a college degree? I plan to do a interview and a survey. I would post the survey on a social media so many people will see it. I plan on making a google forms and sending ...

This type of paper is different then an argument based research paper because you have to do an experiment on your certain topic. You will prepare a report on what you experimented. In this type of paper you are not trying to argue that your point in correct you will use evidence to prove your point. It is based on factual information that you gather. You should put a table in our report it is not as formal as a normal essay would be. You should begin with an abstract. You will not end with a conclusion like other papers. The format of this paper is very different to a argumentative paper. This type of paper is based off of research and interviewing and taking polls from random people.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPKgC8KPBMg Purpose: To get people to buy Budweiser. (your bud's will always be there for you. aka Budweiser will always be there for you.) They want to get there brand out there. How: they show the logo of there brand at the end of the commercial, the actor is wearing a Budweiser hat and is drinking a Budweiser.  1.) they use a catchy song that makes you want to sing 2.) they use the dog and the horse to get to your emotions  3.) the audience that they are targeting are the ones that are watching the super bowl and or drink Budweiser.  Through out the commercial they show how life would be better with a "bud" or a Budweiser in your hand. the commercial takes you on an emotional roller coaster. the commercial plays with your emotions but has a happy ending.  Setting: Its is on a farm. I think that Budweiser chose a farmer to show the american dream or to relate to the public. it shows a middle class and middle...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0YBAast9a9U The author/ speaker of the commercial is Taylor Swift. The purpose of the commercial is if you don't buy the Covergirl product you face wont be as clean. The audience is women that watch tv, wear makeup and want to have clean and clear skin. The ethos part is that Taylor Swift is the credible source because she is a famous singer. the audience thinks that she uses the Covergirl product and that is why her face is so clean and clear. The pathos in the commercial is that is makes the audience want to buy covergirl because that want pretty clean skin like Taylor Swift. The commercial uses music and colors that portray her as confident when using the product. They use the way that her dances with the silk that the product is lightweight. The logos is that they change the product by cutting out the ingredient that makes makeup heavy which fathers the reason to why they say it is lightweight. They try to make it more natural by using cucumber...

Please provide your feed back on my first draft of my paper.

1st Paper- Strengths 1. In text citations were done correctly 2. Easy to read and follow along 3. Had evidence to back up statements Weaknesses 1. paragraphs were very long 2. A ton of information that could have been separated 3. Shouldn't start with a quote 2nd Paper- Strengths 1. I like how it starts out with informing you about the different types of writing 2. The next paragraph is about what the person he interviewed said 3. Then does a great job saying why its academic and non academic Weaknesses 1. Could of used a little more information to bulk up the paper 2. I think the word choice in some parts could have been better 3. Didn't use in text citations 3rd Paper- Strengths 1. They used what a creative writer means to them and other people to start the paper its a good hook 2. Clearly separates who the type of writing refers and the structure they write in (ect) 3. Good in text citations Weaknesses 1. It doesn't have a sentence to connects the...

https://www.britannica.com/technology/engineering This article gives the background information about engineering. The article says what it takes to be an engineer and how to problem solve. This article always has some research to back up there information. Half of the article is academic and the other half is non-academic. It is written from the perspective of someone that knows about engineering. The article has very easy language to understand and uses words that most people know. https://www.engineersaustralia.org.au/For-Students-And-Educators/Engineering-Careers/What-Is-Engineering This article tells you about the different types of engineering, most people might not know that there is more then one type. It is information that most people don't know about. This article is most likely written for people who already have the understanding of certain types of engineering. This article is academic and written by someone that has a clear understanding of the difference betw...