Zoey Paletta Rhetoric Blog

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPKgC8KPBMg Purpose: To get people to buy Budweiser. (your bud's will always be there for you. aka Budweiser will always be there for you.) They want to get there brand out there. How: they show the logo of there brand at the end of the commercial, the actor is wearing a Budweiser hat and is drinking a Budweiser.  1.) they use a catchy song that makes you want to sing 2.) they use the dog and the horse to get to your emotions  3.) the audience that they are targeting are the ones that are watching the super bowl and or drink Budweiser.  Through out the commercial they show how life would be better with a "bud" or a Budweiser in your hand. the commercial takes you on an emotional roller coaster. the commercial plays with your emotions but has a happy ending.  Setting: Its is on a farm. I think that Budweiser chose a farmer to show the american dream or to relate to the public. it shows a middle class and middle...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0YBAast9a9U The author/ speaker of the commercial is Taylor Swift. The purpose of the commercial is if you don't buy the Covergirl product you face wont be as clean. The audience is women that watch tv, wear makeup and want to have clean and clear skin. The ethos part is that Taylor Swift is the credible source because she is a famous singer. the audience thinks that she uses the Covergirl product and that is why her face is so clean and clear. The pathos in the commercial is that is makes the audience want to buy covergirl because that want pretty clean skin like Taylor Swift. The commercial uses music and colors that portray her as confident when using the product. They use the way that her dances with the silk that the product is lightweight. The logos is that they change the product by cutting out the ingredient that makes makeup heavy which fathers the reason to why they say it is lightweight. They try to make it more natural by using cucumber...

Please provide your feed back on my first draft of my paper.

1st Paper- Strengths 1. In text citations were done correctly 2. Easy to read and follow along 3. Had evidence to back up statements Weaknesses 1. paragraphs were very long 2. A ton of information that could have been separated 3. Shouldn't start with a quote 2nd Paper- Strengths 1. I like how it starts out with informing you about the different types of writing 2. The next paragraph is about what the person he interviewed said 3. Then does a great job saying why its academic and non academic Weaknesses 1. Could of used a little more information to bulk up the paper 2. I think the word choice in some parts could have been better 3. Didn't use in text citations 3rd Paper- Strengths 1. They used what a creative writer means to them and other people to start the paper its a good hook 2. Clearly separates who the type of writing refers and the structure they write in (ect) 3. Good in text citations Weaknesses 1. It doesn't have a sentence to connects the...